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Fri Sep 18, 2009, 1:36 PM
I wrote a poem/song whatever you want to call it.
What do you think?









Close your eyes & speak to her
let her understand
she wants to know whats on your mind
she wants to know you
she wants to help you
she'll help you through the rain

he said i don't need help
but everybody does
she shouted i can do it on my own
but you can only do it for so long
they said they're mean to be alone forever
that's why they're so good together

unclench your fists & take his hand
listen to his thoughts
help him understand himself
he needs you now more then ever
he wont admit it
but he needs you to help him through the pain

he says he doesn't need help
but everybody does
she shouted i can do it by myself
but you can only do it for so long
they said they're meant to be alone forever
thats why they're so good together

close your mouth & let her speak
it's her turn
she's going to help you
you'll get past it all with her
listen to her
you've got nothing to lose & everything to gain

finally he says i need help
he understand everybody does
she realized she can't do it herself
she did it for long enough
now they know they're mean to be together
today's the beginning of their forever.

  • Mood: Pleased
  • Listening to: Something by Escape The Fate

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:iconhalflife22:
Thanks. =/

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:icondeanio:
[link] i think you may like that too :) x
:iconelliexlovesxyou:
ah, that's wonderful.
i wish i had a camera that took pictures as nice as that...
:icondeanio:
took too much effort lol as i had no tripod... start saving up for a digital slr i tell you now best thing i ever bought...
:iconelliexlovesxyou:
ha.
saving money is the hardest thing for me to do.
right now i have to find a job, then i have to start saving for a car before anything...
:icondeanio:
saving is hard but trust me if u like photography you'll want a digital slr :)

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