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I wrote a poem/song whatever you want to call it.
What do you think?
Close your eyes & speak to her
let her understand
she wants to know whats on your mind
she wants to know you
she wants to help you
she'll help you through the rain
he said i don't need help
but everybody does
she shouted i can do it on my own
but you can only do it for so long
they said they're mean to be alone forever
that's why they're so good together
unclench your fists & take his hand
listen to his thoughts
help him understand himself
he needs you now more then ever
he wont admit it
but he needs you to help him through the pain
he says he doesn't nee
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Hey, I'm liking your gallery, you're really good at photography :3
why thank you, i've actually been becoming more confident in my work lately from positive feedback from people on here, lol.
so i've been more willing to show my work to people & actually stand there in person & take their criticism.
:]
so i've been more willing to show my work to people & actually stand there in person & take their criticism.
:]
Well, that's good! That's a great quality to have; not many people can take criticism to their face, let alone anywhere else XD
Anyways, keep it up; you have plenty to be confident about.
Anyways, keep it up; you have plenty to be confident about.
XD that's true, thank you :]
Thanks. =/
no problem:]
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